a poem
i'm sorry that i used your skin moisturizer to masturbate with
i watched "amateur allure violet," "please don't tell my parents," and "amateur teen sara"
they were good
after i masturbated i lay on my bed and looked at pictures of sharks on the internet
You know, the first time I read it, it disgusted me and pissed me off. I thought it was neither funny nor poignant, too real to be anything but ugly. I spent about a day, occasionally thinking about it. I love it. Something about it's narrative slap in the face still pisses me off, but their is a humor and slight beauty to it I do think I like very much. Kind of absurd how almost everything we 'want' can come out of the same stupid glowing rectangle.
ReplyDeletehey erik, thank you very much for the detailed response and critique, it is flattering to me that you would think about my poem while not reading it
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