let it be adequately sad and jarring, is my advice for everything like this, when it all of a sudden occurs to a person as a conscious event horizon that what it is will be said.
alec- your 'literature' leaves me feeling 'sad and jarred'. i did not think 'trite' or 'cheap thrills' i did not think 'pretensh' or 'ingenius' but
these three lines are not a haiku i counted the syllables as i was reading them, perhaps it took away from the experience but
your 'writing' will makes itself 'known' in the most 'distinguished literary 'circles' but
you said 'honest' i swear but are you really a boy genius? someone said you were. when i think of honest i think 'honest to god' my best friends mother told us not to say god but
let it be adequately sad and jarring, is my advice for everything like this, when it all of a sudden occurs to a person as a conscious event horizon that what it is will be said.
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ReplyDeleteyour 'literature' leaves me feeling 'sad and jarred'. i did not think 'trite' or 'cheap thrills' i did not think 'pretensh' or 'ingenius' but
these three lines are not a haiku i counted the syllables as i was reading them, perhaps it took away from the experience but
your 'writing' will makes itself 'known' in the most 'distinguished literary 'circles'
but
you said 'honest' i swear but are you really a boy genius? someone said you were.
when i think of honest i think 'honest to god'
my best friends mother told us not to say god
but
so thanks
so here goes,
crystal