Wednesday, August 5, 2009

'honest'

'honest' i swear

this is so hard for me to say

but

3 comments:

  1. let it be adequately sad and jarring, is my advice for everything like this, when it all of a sudden occurs to a person as a conscious event horizon that what it is will be said.

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  2. alec-
    your 'literature' leaves me feeling 'sad and jarred'. i did not think 'trite' or 'cheap thrills' i did not think 'pretensh' or 'ingenius' but

    these three lines are not a haiku i counted the syllables as i was reading them, perhaps it took away from the experience but

    your 'writing' will makes itself 'known' in the most 'distinguished literary 'circles'
    but

    you said 'honest' i swear but are you really a boy genius? someone said you were.
    when i think of honest i think 'honest to god'
    my best friends mother told us not to say god
    but

    so thanks
    so here goes,
    crystal

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